Versions
| Version | Date | Words | Changes | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 5 | Oct 2, 2026, 1:27 PM | 14,345 | 4 | Remove jokes from colophon |
| 4 | Oct 2, 2026, 12:55 PM | 14,405 | 24 | stage directions and more sensible fight dialogue |
| 3 | Oct 2, 2026, 11:27 AM | 14,348 | 1 | A1S13: Tighten exchange between Nadia and Hal. |
| 2 | Oct 2, 2026, 11:21 AM | 14,354 | 3 | Removed an out of character joke. |
| 1 | Oct 2, 2026, 10:51 AM | 14,368 | — | first draft |